The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way in which
sugar
is produced from sugar
cane.
Overall
, the sugar
manufacturing process consists of seven stages, beginning with the growing of sugar
canes and ending up with the drying and cooling of sugar
.
At the beginning of the process, the sugar
cane is grown for 12 to 18 months. After that, it comes the harvesting stage, where it is collected by using a special harvesting machine or human force. In the next stage, canes undergo a crushing process where the juice
is separated from the canes using a crushing machine. After that, to purify the juice
a limestone filter will be used. In the following phase, the juice
passes an evaporating step where a heating system will be used to transform juice
into syrup. Following that, the syrup undergoes a centrifuge where sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup. In the final phase, the product undergoes a drying and cooling procedure.Submitted by akram.amirkulov on
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