The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way in which
sugar
is produced from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
sugar
manufacturing process consists of seven stages, beginning with the growing of Use synonyms
sugar
canes and ending up with the drying and cooling of Use synonyms
sugar
.
At the beginning of the process, the Use synonyms
sugar
cane is grown for 12 to 18 months. After that, it comes the harvesting stage, where it is collected by using a special harvesting machine or human force. In the next stage, canes undergo a crushing process where the Use synonyms
juice
is separated from the canes using a crushing machine. After that, to purify the Use synonyms
juice
a limestone filter will be used. In the following phase, the Use synonyms
juice
passes an evaporating step where a heating system will be used to transform Use synonyms
juice
into syrup. Following that, the syrup undergoes a centrifuge where Use synonyms
sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup. In the final phase, the product undergoes a drying and cooling procedure.Use synonyms
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