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Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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As Artificial intelligence grows
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. Let's begin with, We see many changes in technology
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, In many ,countries
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 very fast and with clarity,
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, companies save lots of salaries of employees.
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 the Nasa report number of companies are investing $84 billion in upcoming projects and
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, Numerous countries use
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 for jobs as drivers, reception, and account departments in the present era. On the second hand, Artificial intelligence lack of side effects on human life and professional life
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 in workplaces that are the reason unemployment increases
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, in the medical field, doctors better understand the emotions of patients and give better advances, But in
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, many international authorities huge amounts spent on robot maintenance.
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 and they do very well perform in their job.
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, AI is very useful in the modern era but in every ,field it is not successful.
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