In recent years, many local shops have closed because customers travel to big shopping malls or centers to do their shopping. is this a positive or a negative development

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In our modern society, it is commonly known that

people

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tend to buy kinds of stuff in the local markets because of

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convenience.

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, reality has proven that many local stores have closed

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larger shopping centres appearing and

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would like to shop there

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of local

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reason, I strongly believe that it can be beneficial for all of us to buy things in just one place, which will be discussed in the following essay. To commence with, there are many different kinds of

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in just one place where

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can find whatever they want.

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, shopping malls contain not only

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but

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many other kinds of entertainment so we can enjoy ourselves

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shopping. There are numerous examples of

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, many families in Ho Chi Minh City who want to do something at the weekend are likely to go to shopping malls have breakfasts, go shopping and other activities.

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, local

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tend to place in different places which could make

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find struggle when want to buy something but

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sure where to get it.

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, I would like to buy a screwdriver.

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, I am not sure where

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the local shop sells

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item and whether they have it or not but I am pretty sure that I can find it in groceries store inside the shopping centre near my apartment. In conclusion, as indicated analysed in the above-mentioned arguments, I would once again confirm my belief that shopping centres will change the way

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buy things and its merits outweigh the drawbacks.

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