In recent years, many local shops have closed because customers travel to big shopping malls or centers to do their shopping. is this a positive or a negative development

In our modern society, it is commonly known that

people

tend to buy kinds of stuff in the local markets because of

its

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their

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convenience.

However

, reality has proven that many local stores have closed

due to

larger shopping centres appearing and

people

would like to shop there

instead

of local

shops

.

For

this

reason, I strongly believe that it can be beneficial for all of us to buy things in just one place, which will be discussed in the following essay. To commence with, there are many different kinds of

shops

in just one place where

people

can find whatever they want.

In addition

, shopping malls contain not only

shops

but

also

many other kinds of entertainment so we can enjoy ourselves

while

shopping. There are numerous examples of

this

.

For example

, many families in Ho Chi Minh City who want to do something at the weekend are likely to go to shopping malls have breakfasts, go shopping and other activities.

Secondly

, local

shops

tend to place in different places which could make

people

find struggle when want to buy something but

not

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are not

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sure where to get it.

For instance

, I would like to buy a screwdriver.

However

, I am not sure where

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the local shop sells

this

item and whether they have it or not but I am pretty sure that I can find it in groceries store inside the shopping centre near my apartment. In conclusion, as indicated analysed in the above-mentioned arguments, I would once again confirm my belief that shopping centres will change the way

people

buy things and its merits outweigh the drawbacks.