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some people believe in the right to freedom of speech. others believe in cesorship. disscuse both views and give your opinion

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 it is often argued that it certainly cannot deny that
people
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 have the right of expressing their opinions freely, other
people
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 believe that they should supervise all their
opinion
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 before publishing
it
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 on any platform. In my
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opinion
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 it is crucial that any kind of
opinion
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 expressing should be censored. So
that
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I totally agree with that view.
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, every person has the right to express his
opinion
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 freely and safely.
Since with his
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opinion
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 he can aware the
people
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 about something
mistake
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mistakes
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 they should
notify
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themnotify
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, or they must stop doing wrong
behavior
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behaviour
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. For
people
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 in Us always
trying
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 make campaigns
for
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to
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 stop eating
meats
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, since
it
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that way
Humens
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humans
 are hurting animals. But the
on the other hand
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 there
is
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are
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 enormous
people
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 trying to publish the wrong behaviors
such
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 as cruelty and violence. So
that
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I totally disagree with that view.
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, the government and high authorities should observe all
kind
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 of
people
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 who
are
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effect
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affect
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on
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apply
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the
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apply
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society positively and negatively.
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, the political publisher and
newspapers
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 sections in Egypt
they
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apply
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should have an approval certificate before making any step or
separate
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separating
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 any news. So
that
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I totally believe that all sectors which
is
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are
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 responsible for public awareness or
effecting
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affecting
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on
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apply
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other
people
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 should be under
eye
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the eye
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.
to conclude
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, I agree that, nowadays there
is
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 many awful
people
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 who are seeking for destroying
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the country
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country
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country's
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 stability by their wrong considerations and religions through newspapers or website platforms. So that all
kind
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kinds
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 of online and offline social media must
supervised
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be supervised
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 by
government
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the government
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 and special observers

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