The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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The given maps demonstrate the region with plenty of industrial buildings in Norbiton, and at the same time provide details about

further

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extending and rebuilding of

this

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area.

Overall

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, all factories that have covered the land early will be replaced with apartments and houses,

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streets will be filled with zones for family entertainment or children developing and places that provide goods and medicaments for the visitors or those who decided to buy an accommodation there.

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the plan, all producing buildings will be ruined or rebuilt, which will help to clear the territory for the subsequent constructions. Juveniles-oriented areas

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as playgrounds or schools will be created near the river.

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, the town will sell the products of natural needs provided by the new shop and medical centre located in the middle of Norbiton.

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, not only old buildings will experience the changes, but the roads and paths will be

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redesigned ,

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, new forks and directions will be introduced.

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, the asphalt will be landed from the centre towards the northwest part of the town, allowing the building of two more houses for the residents.

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, the large bridge across the river will appear on the north side of Norbiton, letting people to get their houses more rapidly and conveniently.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

215 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views.

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think re the causes of this? What effects will have on society?

Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people reduce stress.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the debate over whether school uniforms should be compulsory gets intense, it has become a matter of concern whether people should stick to this traditional way of uniforms or seek alternative solutions.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can indeed pose both social and practical challenges. Do you agree or disagree?