Open plan office no walls no barriers. Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is considered that the logistic services and people are the main cause of

pollution

.Whilst some people are of the opinion that

authourities

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authorities

ought to be

ressponsible

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responsible

for

this

,others believe that it is

fault

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the fault

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of individuals.

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my point of view,it is certainly

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the ressponsibility

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ressponsibility

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responsibility

of each

person

.

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essay will discuss both views and will argue in favour of the latter.

To begin

with,if each

person

had taken

a

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responsibility for

pollution

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the pollution

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we would not have faced

such

tremendous problems with ecology.

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,if each

person

try

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to make our world clearer,the world

wil

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will

get rid of

pollution

.The global level of

pollution

formed

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from

litter

thrown by each

person

.

Moreover

,how we can stop

pollution

of the Earth if we continue to

litter

on the streets for

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.

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Therefore

we by ourselves ought to give an impact

in

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developing

situation

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.

To sum up

,if we personally do our best we will certainly solve

this

problem

.

On the other hand

,

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the government

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need to take the

situatuion

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situation

to

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their control.

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,

government

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the government

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can make

profound

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impact by organising some events to clear the city.

Moreover

,authorities surely have enough resources to solve the

problem

,given the fact that they can put buildings where

litter

can be reproduced,

also

they can increase

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of awareness.

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,

government

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the government

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can introduce

the

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fee

of

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littering on the streets,

thus

citizenz

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citizens

citizen

would

afraid

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be afraid

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to throw

a

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apply

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litter

.

In contrast

,authorities can supply rewards for people that helped with clearing.

To conclude

,

government

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the government

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has an enormous amount of ways how to solve the

problem

. In conclusion,

government

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the government

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has a vast number of opportunities to reduce the level of

pollution

,

hovewer

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however

if each individual

try

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to

imapct

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impact

to solve the

problem

,it will be more impact than .

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i

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am of the opinion that it is certainly

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the ressponsibility

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ressponsibility

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responsibility

of each

person

.Let`s make our world clearer,by trying to do it ourselves.