Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The diagram illustrates the growth of a
village
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called “
Chorleywood
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” from 1868 to 1994. There is a massive development of the transport infrastructure of
Chorleywood
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throughout four distinct periods. As we can see on the map, the populated areas increased around the transport means main road, motorway, and
railway
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. Between 1868 and 1883, a small area was located next to one of the main roads.
Chorleywood
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Park and Golf course is now suited nearby
this
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original
village
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area.
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, from 1882 to 1922, the
railway
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was built in 1909 and connected the west and the east of the
village
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, so in the intersection between the
railway
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and one of the main roads in the south, a population extension was established.
Chorleywood
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station is in
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part. The expansion of
Chorleywood
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continued alongside the
railway
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from the east to the west until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the
village
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, and from 1970 to 1994,
further
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development of the town took place around motorway intersections with the
railway
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and one of the main roads.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, chorleywood, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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