It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued whether

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or practice is the key to success. I believe that practice is more important than

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, and that in order to be

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truly

successful one must work hard to master what he or she does. There are two main reasons why people think that being talented is of high importance.

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,

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is something a person is born with it, so it is often noticed from a very young age. In

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newspaper, there was an article about Sofia,

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girl, who has an

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amazing

voice and has been performing on stage

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for the

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two years.

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a

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can not be

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required

, it is a gift only

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have.

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, people who are talented are usually very creative. One of the most expensive paintings in the world was painted 5 years ago by an artist who had never had any professional training.

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,

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believe,

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always pays off. The more time and energy one spends to learn a skill, the better they become. Practice, patience and

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commitment

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are the

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recipe

for success.

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, when someone puts

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a great effort to ace a skill, it is more likely that they will be

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successful

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the long run. In a study done in the United States of America, a researcher found that

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children

who spent more

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20 hours a week for more than two years

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an instrument, were more likely to be successful musicians in the future. In conclusion, in my opinion,

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talent

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is important for success, dedication and working hard come first.