It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued whether
talent
or practice is the key to success. I believe that practice is more important than
talent
, and that in order to be
truely
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truly
successful one must work hard to master what he or she does. There are two main reasons why people think that being talented is of high importance.
Firstly
,
talent
is something a person is born with it, so it is often noticed from a very young age. In
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newspaper, there was an article about Sofia,
5 year old
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girl, who has an
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amazing
voice and has been performing on stage
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for the
last
two years.
Such
a
talent
can not be
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acquired
required
, it is a gift only
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have.
Secondly
, people who are talented are usually very creative. One of the most expensive paintings in the world was painted 5 years ago by an artist who had never had any professional training.
However
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believe,
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commitment
always pays off. The more time and energy one spends to learn a skill, the better they become. Practice, patience and
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commitment
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are the
receipe
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recipe
for success.
Moreover
, when someone puts
such
a great effort to ace a skill, it is more likely that they will be
sucessful
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successful
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the long run. In a study done in the United States of America, a researcher found that
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children
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20 hours a week for more than two years
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an instrument, were more likely to be successful musicians in the future. In conclusion, in my opinion,
although
talent
is important for success, dedication and working hard come first.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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