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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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 in the future all kinds of
vehicles
 will control themselves without drivers and there will be only passengers inside of them who want to travel. Lack of communication and programming issues are the main drawbacks of
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 because of safety and accuracy. One of the main problems of self-driving
vehicles
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 communication issues. During
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long trips it is boring
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 people spend most of their time on their
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 or watching movies from monitors
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inside
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the
vehicles
,
however
, they need to have a chat with somebody nearby but self-driving
vehicles
 will not
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 of that
besides
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robotic answers. Another issue is mistakes
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made in
programming
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 of these
vehicles
 by producers.
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result
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, some functions of these
vehicles
 will not work properly and without a driver, passengers cannot fix these problems by themselves.
For example
, if some technical problem occurs in the systems of self-driving
vehicles
 they will stop driving.
Besides
 the drawbacks of driverless
vehicles
, there are several advantages that I believe
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make them so useful.
Firstly
, these
vehicles
 are so safe because they are produced with the help of
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artificial intelligence and creates included their programming all traffic rules. If in the future all
vehicles
 will control themselves without a driver that will decrease the level of accident risks on the roads because some
of
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the
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drivers tend to break the traffic laws, in today's world and
that is
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 incidents.
Also
, if there is
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problem
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functions
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the functions
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 of
car
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 they can reach their passengers the certain locations accurately.
For example
, these
vehicles
 will use maps that will help them to find the closest ways to
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certain points and that will reduce the amount of time used on the roads. In conclusion, despite
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several drawbacks that self-driving
vehicles
 have, their advantages outweigh
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the disadvantages
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 because of
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 safety and accuracy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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