Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

#english #friend #house #visit

Dear Yeamin, Hope you are doing well. I am excited to let you know that we have moved to a new place. We were having a tough time adjusting in a 2-bedroom apartment and we need some more space for guests coming to our place. So, we started looking and

finally

, we are in our new home. Our new house has 3 bedrooms, 1 huge living room, 1 dining room, 1 spacious kitchen and 1 big backyard. The backyard is large enough to play soccer 3 a side. We can

also

have a barbecue party during summer. The house is in the perfect location for me as my work location is very suitable for commuting. Why don’t you come around

this

weekend and see how my new place is? We would love to see you and if the weather is good, we can have a barbeque party. Please let me know you suitable time and call me whenever you want to come. Best Regards, Nazmul

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