Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Yeamin, Hope you are doing well. I am excited to let you know that we have moved to a new place. We were having a tough time adjusting in a 2-bedroom apartment and we need some more space for guests coming to our place. So, we started looking and

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, we are in our new home. Our new house has 3 bedrooms, 1 huge living room, 1 dining room, 1 spacious kitchen and 1 big backyard. The backyard is large enough to play soccer 3 a side. We can

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have a barbecue party during summer. The house is in the perfect location for me as my work location is very suitable for commuting. Why don’t you come around

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weekend and see how my new place is? We would love to see you and if the weather is good, we can have a barbeque party. Please let me know you suitable time and call me whenever you want to come. Best Regards, Nazmul

yeahyeaminTue Jul 18 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

relocate
move
settle in
residence
accommodation
spacious
cozy
modern
amenities
features
guest room
look forward to
excited to
catch up
explore
unpack
neighborhood

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