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Today more people are overweight than ever before.What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

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Being overweight is becoming more widespread among many people these days.
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as well as
 the effects related to
this
 tendency. There are a variety of different causes for
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 with, the foremost causes of gaining weight are inactive lifestyles and unhealthy leisure activities. Technology is increasingly developing to help people less physically demanding at work.
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, my father after a stressful day at the company, will relax by surfing Facebook, and YouTube
instead
 of walking and exercising Another contributing factor to mention is using fast food in place of a main meal. These foods are prone to bacterial contamination
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 and contain a lot of preservatives.
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, if we eat too much fast food, a large amount of fat and preservation are
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absorbed
absobe
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absorbed
 into the body causing diseases Unexpectedly, there are some to be taken into consideration. The first and most important is to cause blood pressure diseases. Another effect no less important is easy to
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 inferiority.
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, an overweight person needs to put more effort to complete some tasks than a person with a normal weight In conclusion, overweight is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It’s mainly caused by lifestyles and unhealthy leisure activities. From what has been discussed, it is advised that should be a healthy lifestyle
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