The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph and table illustrate the breakdown of monthly recordings of the centigrade and the total no. of
hours
the sunlight per annum in London
, New York and Sydney
.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that every year in January, the temperature of Sydney
is higher, whereas
the climate of London
is very low relative to other countries.
Accordingly
, Sydney
is getting a higher centigrade approximately a quarter. While
London
has a low temperature of below five degrees
in the month of January. Over the period of twelve months, it is increasing gradually and peaks to slightly below 30 degrees
, Further
it drops to five degrees
Celsius in the month of December.
In the same way, New York also
records the same quantity of degrees
Celsius which are about to London
temperatures. As coming to the sunshine, New York has more no. of hours
than Sydney
, London
2,535 hours
whereas
London
has very fewer hours
compared to other countries.Submitted by kavilvk1 on
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