Popular events like the foot boll World Cup and other international Sporting Occasions are essential in easting international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. How To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Its often argued by people that sporting events

such

as the football world cup or other international sports activities are a way for

countries

to reduce tension against each other,

while

others believe that

this

could lead to more problems with each other . I s believe that sporting events would be advantageous,

however

, there are a few drawbacks on the one hand , a competition like a football tournament will bring

countries

to unite and enjoy the sport, which would release the tension between the nations,

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moreover

,

this

would be a safe way for

countries

to show aggression rather than starting a war.

For instance

,the people holding grudges can let go of their emotions

while

seeing their team beat the opposing team.Other benefits of these events would be hosting a tournament and inviting different

countries

to come play which would result in better understanding between the

countries

.

On the other hand

, it would be risky for players to travel to a country where they are not welcome,

additionally

, the people might take

this

as an opportunity to hurt the players.

Therefore

countries

that are not allies should not participate until the government has resolved their issues.

for example

, during the

last

world cup which was held in saudi arabia, the officials decided not to welcome a country they did not have a mutual understanding with,

hence

they prevented a lot of crimes and problems which would have been faced by the players. In conclusion, some communities believe that sporting tournaments between regions would have a drastic negative impact,

however

,I significantly believe that

this

could help societies to unite and find a solution to their problems in a friendly manner.The government should apply initiative measures to protect foreign troupes and welcome them to their country,

by

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it

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would lead to

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mutual friendship and respect among the

countries

.