The graph shows the average patients visitting four clinics in 2010 and 2016.

The line graph demonstrates the rate of people who come to four clinics

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check-ups each week between 2010 and 2016.

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, it can be seen that in 2010 the number of

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going to birth control clinic were the highest, but in 2016 the figure for

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patients

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had the fastest increase. In the first two years, the data of people checking up for birth control,

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, and diabetes rose from around 250, 125, and 60 to nearly 300, 150, and 100 respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for dental

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dropped from 100 to approximately 50 in the same period. For four years from 2012 to 2016, there was a double increase in the data for

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and dental

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from about 100 and 50 to nearly 200 and 150 at the same time.

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, the figure for birth control

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it returned back to the same rate in 2010.

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, the rate of

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reached its peak at 350 people.

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of the period, the number of

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check-ups had the highest data than the other clinics