The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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The table chart provides data about school
teachers
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’ wages in 5 countries, namely Australia,
Denmark
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, Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea in 2009.
Overall
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, Luxembourg has the by far highest salaries of high school
teachers
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in contrast
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, the lowest figure was seen in Australia from its starting point to 15
years
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later. Korean
teachers
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get 30,000 dollars
while
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Austrailans start just above it, with 34.000. Both of them increase over the
years
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and after 15
years
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, their salaries stand at 48.000.
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amount refers to a maximum wage for Australian high school
teachers
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that achieves in 9
years
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, the highest salary for Koreans reaches 62.000 and they can get it within 34
years
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. Japanese
teachers
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’ sums are just over them, at 34,000 and it witnesses a huge increase,
subsequently
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, it reaches 65.000, and after 37
years
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they can get 86.000. The starting point of
Denmark
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and Luxembourg
teachers
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’ payments are 45,000 and 80,000 respectively. Within 15
years
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, both of them demonstrated a rise; the former is 54.000 which is
Denmark
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's peak, and the ladder is 119.000.
Denmark
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teachers
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can get maximum wages in 8
years
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,
while
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Luxembourgers see 132.000 dollars as the highest payment within 30
years
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words denmark, teachers, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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