The images below explain the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.

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figure reveals how human pollution creates a devastating cycle of even more pollution in flora and fauna owing to the fact that acid rain is spreading all over the country.
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, it can clearly be seen that recent industrial cultures produce many poisonous compounds like carbon, mercury, oxides and others through accommodation, transportation and the unsustainable supply of energy. These pollutants eventually emerge into the clouds, and in the next step, the contaminated clouds move all over the nation distributing their acid rain on agriculture, forests, oceans and lakes.
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but not least, the pollutants will be incorporated
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animals, farming products like vegetables, grain,
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, drinking water. Sadly but true,
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process will
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start all over again: as entering the food chain our domesticated animals and us will suffer from miscellaneous diseases caused by the adverse effects pollutants will have on our bodies and our health.
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