You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Stephanie, I hope to see you good in health. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about the visit I am planning to pay to your place for a couple of days. As I haven't occupied the annual holidays so I will be utilizing one week to come there. I have a few ideas for spending

this

time

together with

joy. I am so excited about the release of an upcoming Hollywood movie.

Moreover

, I know, you

also

like to watch films,

therefore

this

is the best chance for us to go to a movie one day. For the rest of the days, we may go for a picnic in a mountainous region. We may cook food and sing songs during the duration. One day we should go shopping

also

. I am so excited to meet you by the end of the coming week. I can't wait to see you. Take care of yourself. Yours Sincerely Sadia Khan

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

161 words

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You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

“Rapid advances in technology will make the world of the future a more dangerous place” Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.