You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words.

#time #work #visit #close #friend #stephanie #activities

Dear Stephanie, I hope to see you good in health. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about the visit I am planning to pay to your place for a couple of days. As I haven't occupied the annual holidays so I will be utilizing one week to come there. I have a few ideas for spending

this

time

together with

joy. I am so excited about the release of an upcoming Hollywood movie.

Moreover

, I know, you

also

like to watch films,

therefore

this

is the best chance for us to go to a movie one day. For the rest of the days, we may go for a picnic in a mountainous region. We may cook food and sing songs during the duration. One day we should go shopping

also

. I am so excited to meet you by the end of the coming week. I can't wait to see you. Take care of yourself. Yours Sincerely Sadia Khan

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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9 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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