Your Australian friend is thinking about making a short visit to your country, and intends to visit a particular tourist attraction during his/her stay. However, you feel that it would be better for your friend to visit a different tourist attraction. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good time for your friend to visit your country say why it would be better to visit a different tourist attraction suggest that you and your friend meet

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Dear Ricky, I hope

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letter finds you well. I'm writing to you with regard to the mail you sent me yesterday about your visit to India with a plan to stay in Agra.

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me the most suitable time to travel to my country is from October to March as the climate is a bit cooler compared to the summers which are very hot.

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, during that month you can enjoy "Diwali" the most famous festival of Indians. Later on "Christmas" and "Uttrayan" are

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celebrated very enthusiastically.

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, I went through your itinerary and found out that you're visiting Agra to see the Taj Mahal, I would recommend you cancel that place as it is overcrowded every time

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, transport facilities are not up to the mark as well.

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, you can travel to South India, there are many artistically sculpted temples and mosques you can visit there, with less crowd. Most importantly, If time permits I am looking forward to meeting you.

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, spending a day with you, we can go for food and I can show you my town by myself. Best wishes, Prajesh

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