some people think that modern invention have more problem as compared to their benefits .do you agree or disagree?

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In today's era with the improvement of technology there is

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variety of inventions that can

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many people agree that high benefits are more than negative in

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there are many creating and invention devices that make a big shift in our

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the communication between countries is able for each one has internet, modern created but the global in one village with extremely services.

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declined value that leads impact all socialization respectively economic and the lifestyle of individual's, morals the senses around the nature is completely change ,To be ,honest I more agree with the second believing because I don't like on my aged going with today speed I need to test the

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with more felling and gave myself the chance to do all that need in reality .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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