Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/ her to a party at your home and include the following: - what the party is about - give directions how to get to your place - suggest how to accommodate him/ her

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Hi Frank, How are things in Sydney? It has been a long time since we met since you moved to Australia. I’m extremely glad to invite you down here to a birthday party next

month

at my place You would love to know that my son will be one year by next

month

so I’m delivering a big dashing birthday party on his first birthday. I

also

invited our school friends so it’d be a great time to catch up with them. The party is scheduled for 27th of next

month

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Survey is

metropolitan

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a metropolitan

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city now, you can find

a flight tickets

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flight tickets

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for the airport in Surrey. From there, you can take the Metro rail service to reach my house. I will send you

Google

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the Google

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map’s

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location of my residence and you can track it down to come to my home. Even though I have a 2-bedroom apartment but

due to

several guests, I booked a decent hotel’s guest rooms just a five minutes walk from my place. You’ll not feel any discomfort

while

living in that hotel at all. I paid for meals for guests already. Anyway, tell me what you think, and would you be able to make it here next

month

? Hopefully, I will see you soon. Hope to hear from you soon, Harpal

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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