Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are many reasons why several
schools
allowed pupils Use synonyms
bring
their Fix the infinitive
to bring
phones
during learning activities. Use synonyms
Although
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children
might lose focus in classrooms, I believe that they Use synonyms
allowed
to bring their Add a missing verb
are allowed
phones
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due to
safety Linking Words
aspect
.
On the one hand, in learning schemes, Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
phones
make Use synonyms
kids
easily distracted as they contain games that Use synonyms
addictive
. Add a missing verb
are addictive
Moreover
, Linking Words
children
nowadays very excel in accessing information and in operating their Use synonyms
smart
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smartphones
phones
. It could Use synonyms
hindering
them in not only giving attention to their teachersChange the verb form
hinder
be hindering
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
doing something Linking Words
inapproproate
. Correct your spelling
inappropriate
In addition
, Linking Words
kids
do not have Use synonyms
sense
of responsibility and good emotional management. To illustrate, there is a pupil who record a teacher Add an article
a sense
while
teaching and it went viral on social media, it Linking Words
really
against Add a missing verb
is really
teacher
rights by sharing their privacy. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Furthermore
, it could Linking Words
be argues
that Change the verb form
be argued
forbiding
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forbidding
children
to use Use synonyms
phones
in Use synonyms
school
environment could lighten teacher’s Correct article usage
the school
job
.
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
On the other hand
, allowing Linking Words
kids
to bring Use synonyms
phones
to Use synonyms
schools
has, Use synonyms
therefore
, been implemented as a policy that would help teachers’ workforce. If Linking Words
kids
Use synonyms
using
their Wrong verb form
use
phones
in Use synonyms
schools
, it would be easy for them to communicate with their parents. Nowadays, there are many criminal activities targeting pupils, and indeed Use synonyms
the
parents are worried Correct article usage
apply
concerning
Change preposition
about
this
issue. The majority of Linking Words
schools
in Asia, Use synonyms
for instance
, support Linking Words
children
to bring their Use synonyms
phone
, even though they did not agree with that in the first place. The reason Fix the agreement mistake
phones
of
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for
that is
the parents there gather to Linking Words
pushed
and argued Wrong verb form
push
the
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against the
schools
Use synonyms
due to
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childrens’
safety. Change noun form
children’s
Consequently
, the Linking Words
schools
agree as it could prevent any crimes that might happen to pupils.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
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phones
could make students distracted, it enables them to contact their family regarding Use synonyms
to
their condition and position. I share the same opinion with that as Remove the preposition
apply
schools
Use synonyms
unable
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are unable
ensuring
students’ safety.Change the verb form
to ensure
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