Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many reasons why several

schools

allowed pupils

bring

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their

phones

during learning activities.

Although

children

might lose focus in classrooms, I believe that they

allowed

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to bring their

phones

due to

safety

aspect

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aspects

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. On the one hand, in learning schemes,

phones

make

kids

easily distracted as they contain games that

addictive

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.

Moreover

,

children

nowadays very excel in accessing information and in operating their

smart

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smartphones

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phones

. It could

hindering

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them in not only giving attention to their teachers

,

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but

also

doing something

inapproproate

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inappropriate

.

In addition

,

kids

do not have

sense

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of responsibility and good emotional management. To illustrate, there is a pupil who record a teacher

while

teaching and it went viral on social media, it

really

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against

teacher

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teachers

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rights by sharing their privacy.

Furthermore

, it could

be argues

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that

forbiding

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forbidding

children

to use

phones

in

school

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the school

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environment could lighten teacher’s

job

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.

On the other hand

, allowing

kids

to bring

phones

to

schools

has,

therefore

, been implemented as a policy that would help teachers’ workforce. If

kids

using

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their

phones

in

schools

, it would be easy for them to communicate with their parents. Nowadays, there are many criminal activities targeting pupils, and indeed

the

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parents are worried

concerning

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this

issue. The majority of

schools

in Asia,

for instance

, support

children

to bring their

phone

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phones

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, even though they did not agree with that in the first place. The reason

of

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for

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that is

the parents there gather to

pushed

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and argued

the

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schools

due to

childrens’

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safety.

Consequently

, the

schools

agree as it could prevent any crimes that might happen to pupils. In conclusion,

while

phones

could make students distracted, it enables them to contact their family regarding

to

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their condition and position. I share the same opinion with that as

schools

unable

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ensuring

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students’ safety.