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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps provide a comparison of the layout of Colwick Arts Center before and after experiencing several innovations from 2005 to now. From an
overall
 perspective, the layout of
this
center
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 has undergone pronounced changes with the construction of new amenities both indoor and outdoor. Today, the Snack Bar on the top left-hand corner was replaced by two Meeting Rooms and a Drama Studio, which are smaller in size. Meanwhile,
Gallery
 1 and
Gallery
 2 are joined into a huge
Gallery
 and replaced the Meeting Room. The Toilet was transformed into a Café, which was perpendicular to the
Gallery
,
while
 the newly erected Toilet was relocated opposite the Cafe. The Concert Hall and Cinema was separated into two sections, which form a right angle to the
south-east
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. The space in the middle is now the central exhibition
area
,
whereas
 the information desk remained unchanged over the period. Regarding the outside
area
, the wasteland now functions as an outdoor exhibition and performance
area
. Located in the middle of the
area
 is locates a stage, which is surrounded by many trees. And, many tables are placed on two sides of the
area
.
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