Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: Describe the book. Why do you want him/her to read it? Tell him/her how to get the book.

Dear Robin, Hope you're well! I'm writing

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to let you know about the book which I just completed.

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week, I bought a book "Atomic Habits" by Benjamin Hills. It's a self-help book based on how we can develop or drop a new habit in 21 days,

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was the 2021's New York bestseller. Since I know that you love books related to self-development.

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why I thought I should share it with you. Remember,

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month you told me that you want to join the gym but you're not able to make it your habit, so

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can

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help you with it. I bought it from a local store named James bookstore, it's in Darya ganj. You can

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buy it from them, their contact number is 98xxxxx. Plus, they

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provide a facility to send books at home within 24 hours in Delhi NCR. Hope you'd like it too. Your lovingly, Jaskaran

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: Describe the book. Why do you want him/her to read it? Tell him/her how to get the book.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that public transportation should be free for all users do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?