You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. In your letter •ask about the city. •Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years •why you have decided for this course

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Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you in a pink of health. I am writing to share a piece of exciting news about my personal life. Actually, I have decided to apply for higher studies at one of the reputed universities in Ottawa, Canada. As you've been living there for a decade now, I would like to know a few details

such

as culture, people, jobs and accommodation available in

this

city. As you know that I have been working as a Junior Software Engineer for a couple of years now which made me bored.

However

, I have

finally

chosen to leave the job and explore new career opportunities, which leads to a plan for a master's in a new country. I am sure that it will help me to experience different aspects of life.

Also

, I was thinking to move abroad for many years and I heard about

this

renowned college. Atlanta University is awarded as number one in entire North America.

Therefore

, I have planned to opt for MS in information technology, which will be a two years course.

This

course will commence in January 2024. I look forward to seeing you soon there. Yours Lovingly, Jake Smith

Submitted by MT on Tue Jul 18 2023

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