The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the current
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day, it is more often Thursday when the bins are emptied.
The unsanitary conditions created by overflowing refuse bins are not only affecting the appearance of the area but Use synonyms
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the health and well-being of the residents. Rats and cockroaches are becoming prevalent, invading nearby homes.
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, it would be helpful if the council reviewed the current Linking Words
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Yours faithfully,
Kurt FinchLinking Words
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