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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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Many
people
 will not buy physical
newspapers
 or books in the future because they do not need to spend money
then
 can read everything online. Personally, I completely disagree with
this
 point of view. A couple of opinions will be highlighted in
this
 write-up. In my perspective, there are some advantages for
people
 who decide to read
newspapers
 online. Because the internet plays a significant role in our life, we use it for a whole time.
Also
, the smartphone is very convenient to take, they easily read
newspapers
 online anytime.
In addition
, if
people
 want to read a book,
then
 they just need to save the books online on their phone.
On the other hand
, new media
such
 as e-books are not suitable for everyone and cannot be ignored. As elderly
people
 lack
of
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ability to understand those products, especially when they do not have a person who stands by for assisting them.
In addition
, physical papers are more fittable for their lifestyle, because they will not be bothered by complex pages online, and watching the screen too much will
also
 have a harmful effect on their eyes.
Moreover
, some
people
 who major in design or news media will need to collect magazines or
newspapers
 to help them with their graduation exhibition in the future. In conclusion, it is true that e-books bring a lot of advantages to
people
's lives, but they still cannot replace the traditional methods completely, because it is not easy for elderly
people
 to be familiar with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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