Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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other states
suffring
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suffering
while
it is not Correct word choice
but
effective
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an effective
countries
should offers
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offer
another kinds
of Replace the adjective
another kind
other kinds
supplies
to poor states. In fact
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statement
the
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countries
should provied
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provide
the
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countiews
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countries
counties
others
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other
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methods
money
donation
.
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donations
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money
donation has a short term
effect. since the poor person doesn't have Add a hyphen
short-term
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good mentality, how he can manage his Correct article usage
a
money
and recycle it to earn more.
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however
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a good
countries
their
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apply
attmpts
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attempts
towardes
the poor Correct your spelling
toward
country
by offering them mony
, but they should know Correct your spelling
money
money
is not remain as a result
of awful
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the awful
managment
of poor people. Correct your spelling
management
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war Add an article
the nuclear
it
had been Correct pronoun usage
apply
destroied
completely but because they have been Correct your spelling
destroyed
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working
on
their educational sectors. nowadays Japan from the Change preposition
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most rich
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richest
country
over
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in
word
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world
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they
the
donations in the right sectors
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apply
on the other hand
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such
as technological supplies
or educational supplies
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apply
supplies
are really crucial,
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apply
country
is rely on the educations
. if the county has Fix the agreement mistake
education
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an intellegent
intellegent tution
rate Correct your spelling
intelligent tuition
then
, its economy will enhace
rapidly. because the Correct your spelling
enhance
intellegent
generation will work in the future for the Correct your spelling
intelligent
country
and that will bring the country
a brilliant economic status. as
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the
result Correct article usage
a
the
poverty will end fastly.
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to conclude
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with
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thet
educational and technological Correct your spelling
that
supplies
from rich countries
to poor states more
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are more
theses
kinds of Correct your spelling
these
supplies
as a long term impacts
. in Correct the article-noun agreement
a long term impact
long term impacts
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contract
contracts
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contract
contractm
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money
donetions
has Correct your spelling
donations
short term
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short-term
existance
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existence
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