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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie chart illustrates compare between the
ages
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 of the people of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and expectations for 2050.
Overall
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,in ,Yemen
age
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 15-59
years
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 rate peaked and
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age
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the age
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 of 0-14
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 gradually dropped
moreover
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 the
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 of +60
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 increased,in Italy plummeted from the
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 of 0-14
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 and grow
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 of +60
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,with go down in the
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 of 15-59
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.
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 , noticeable in ,Yemen age15-59
years
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 was 2000 around 46.3%
Whereas
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 it will be significantly higher in 2050 roughly 57.3%
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 the proportion 0-14
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 will decline by approximately 37.0% in 2050
However
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 was just over 50.1% in 2000,by ,contrast
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 +60
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 will rise just below of around 3.6% in 2000 to just over 5.7% in 2050. On the other side,in Italy
ages
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 15-59
years
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 after that will experience a downward trend was in 2000 roughly 61.6%
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 in 2050 it will go down to just over 46.2%,Naxt for
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 0-14
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 it will just low approximately 11.5 in 2050
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 was in 2000 around increased 14.3%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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