A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for to open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of playing for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of the employees working in the customer service department in your
company
. I am writing
this
letter to provide my opinion regarding how to spend money either on sponsoring the
children
's
sports
team or playing concerts in
this
Eglinton
areas
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of Toronto city. First of all, there are many benefits to sponsoring
children
's
sports
team
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teams
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. Mainly,
children
can have a chance to play outdoor games which not only makes them physically strong but
also
it helps to develop
sports
skills, which can
further
help to opt for a professional career if the child becomes good at it.
Moreover
, by sponsoring
children
, the
company
would create a good reputation in the eyes of parents and the government, which indirectly elevates the growth of our firm. Now, if the
company
would play concerts it attracts youngsters and teenage a lot in terms of leisure activities. Leisure time should be enjoyed by the public and a concert is a good option because music works as a therapy, it rejuvenates the human being. I personally believe it would be more beneficial for the
company
to spend on the
children
's
sports
teams, by organising
sports
events, the cost of the coach, making a nice playground and
sports
building in
this
area. I hope my feedback points will take into consideration. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Denial Moore
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