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Nowadays,a growing number of people with healt problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Today, many
people
 with bad health conditions prefer conservative medicines and treatments compared to going to medical
doctors
 to inspect. From my perspective,
this
 situation could create serious issues
people's
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 health, for
uneducated
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the uneducated
an uneducated
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person
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people
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 who use
alternative
medicine
 to treat
people
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 can harm themselves and
the
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other
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others
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 because of their
a
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lack of knowledge of medical subjects.
Therefore
, the
improvment
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improvement
 of
alternative
medicine
 has huge negative effects on patient's lives.
To begin
 with, development in
medicine
 has gradually caught on all over the world and many scientists
sacrifise
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sacrifice
sacrificed
 their lives to find treatments for some disease which has high-level mortality
such
 as cancer. These professionals have to call for many skills to graduate from medical school.
However
, look at the other
sides
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,
people
 who use
alternative
medicine
 (including herbal
medicine
, and
acupunture
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acupuncture
) do not have even a certificate.
Hence
, patients who believe fake
doctors
 endanger their lives.
On the other hand
, there is no evidence about the treatment of
alternative
medicine
.
Additionaly
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Additionally
, when making a treatment with herbals, mixing some plants could be toxic
for
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human
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the human
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 body. If
people
 take
this
medicine
, their bodies might be damaged
irreversibily
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irreversibly
irreversible
.
Moreover
,
this
 medical condition may be unfixed by
the
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doctors
due to
 a lack of scientific research.
To conclude
, the main disadvantage of
alternative
 therapies is that
it
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 could be a powerful gun with no real
doctors
.
Nonetheless
, governments do not try to curb these kinds of
people
 in order to protect their citizens. I hope governments will take action in the activities of reducing used
alternative
medicine
 treatment in the future.
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