Your friend has asked you to help find a music teacher for their child. Write to your friend describing the teacher you have found. Explain why they are suitable Explain their background Explaing how they can get in touch
Dear Keran,
How have you been ? Hope everything is going well with you and your family. I am writing
this
regarding your requirement for a music
teacher for your two kids.
Last
month, during one of a musical party, I meet Mr. Mark and found as an excellent musician, especially with the piano. He is in the field for the last
few years and also
performing with some well-known bands in the country.During a conversation with him, he explain his father was a music
teacher at the Grand Music
School. He had done a Master's in Music
from a reputed music
school in London.
I have shared your number with him, by any chance if there is no response from him within a week, let me know I will arrange for an alternative. Hope he will be an excellent teacher for your babies.
Let me know if you need any other help with the matter.
Thanking you,
Yours lovingly,
Jen.Submitted by jaimini2000 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite