The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015
The given bar
chart
illustrates
waste
group by disposal area from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
, there are four types of
waste
;
paper
,
glass
, tins and garden. The highest
waste
collected by the
garbage
centre was
paper
,
while
the least was garden reprocessing. Looking at the details of the
chart
, in 2011
paper
waste
consisted of 57
tons
of
waste
,
,
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additionally
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paper
litter towards three years (2011-2014) was under 60
tons
of
garbage
. In the final year (2015)
paper
waste
reached the peak of the
chart
(70
tons
of
waste
). The next year (2011)
glass
was made up of 48
tons
of
waste
, it is interesting to note that in 2013
garbage
glass
was composed of the same amount of
waste
.
Furthermore
, the rubbish
of
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glass
increased
up to
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52
tons
of
waste
. Turning to the other details of the
chart
,
waste
collection of tins fluctuated over the years, in 2012 it made up 27
tons
of litter. In 2014 it came out with 33
tons
of
garbage
,
however
in the final year erode of tins reached up to 39
tons
.
Moreover
, the
waste
in the garden experienced crucial changes during the period, in the final ,stage it was made up of 35
tons
of
garbage
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, waste, paper, glass, garbage, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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