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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Bruce, I hope
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 letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I’m writing
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 letter to feel sorry about your brand-new Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) that got damaged by me accidentally. A week ago,
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 I was going to university on foot, I was hit by an automobile.
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, I fell down and your Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) I was carrying in my backpack, to be more specific, its screen was damaged. When I tried to run it, the display went black. I showed it to a local technique service
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 called “Apple Cure” and after checking it thoroughly, they suggested that I had to take it to the “Apple service
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” located in Malika, Yunusobod district. When I got there and presented your gadget, they advised me to go for a new display. I apologize for my honest mistake, and the repair expenses will be on me. I hope you would understand that the whole episode happened to me and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jack Richard

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