You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Bruce, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I’m writing

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letter to feel sorry about your brand-new Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) that got damaged by me accidentally. A week ago,

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I was going to university on foot, I was hit by an automobile.

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, I fell down and your Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) I was carrying in my backpack, to be more specific, its screen was damaged. When I tried to run it, the display went black. I showed it to a local technique service

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called “Apple Cure” and after checking it thoroughly, they suggested that I had to take it to the “Apple service

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” located in Malika, Yunusobod district. When I got there and presented your gadget, they advised me to go for a new display. I apologize for my honest mistake, and the repair expenses will be on me. I hope you would understand that the whole episode happened to me and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jack Richard

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

178 words

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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

18. Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some ways. Do you agree or disagree.

Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?