You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Bruce, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I’m writing

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letter to feel sorry about your brand-new Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) that got damaged by me accidentally. A week ago,

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I was going to university on foot, I was hit by an automobile.

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, I fell down and your Apple iPad Pro 12,9 (2022) I was carrying in my backpack, to be more specific, its screen was damaged. When I tried to run it, the display went black. I showed it to a local technique service

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called “Apple Cure” and after checking it thoroughly, they suggested that I had to take it to the “Apple service

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” located in Malika, Yunusobod district. When I got there and presented your gadget, they advised me to go for a new display. I apologize for my honest mistake, and the repair expenses will be on me. I hope you would understand that the whole episode happened to me and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jack Richard

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

178 words

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