Young people say that travelling to different countries benefits them and the society. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.

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In
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globalised world, youth generations believe that experiencing other nations in person gives a good impact on both themselves and the communities. Even though there can be several views on
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statement, I agree that the benefits from it outweighs the drawbacks. In
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essay, I would like to suggest my opinion with two supportive reasons. To commence with, unlike in the olden days, we can travel to almost every place without any problems. Especially
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the develop social media and technologies, young generations are inclined to experience other
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cultures and vibes in person.
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trend can be beneficial to them since it makes them widen their views and perspectives by experiencing other citizens' cultures directly.
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, as per a news report, it is much more effective than trying and learning new cultures and languages in person
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travelling to actual
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rather than indirectly through the internet or books.
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, it can be a good chance for societies economically. When they promote travelling to youngsters, it is inevitable for them to spend money on flights or trains, and accommodation.
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, it can give a huge economical impact on society.
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, some
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have working holiday programs for foreign youth people.
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visa allows people to work and travel in those
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.
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, the travellers can fill the country's insufficient workforce,
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, give economic benefits
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they travel and live in that country.
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, even though we need to consider the downside of
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issue, I believe that travelling all around the world can be beneficial for both young generations and society.
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