The diagram shows the different stages in the process of recycling waste paper by machine.
The diagram shows all the
steps
in waste
paper
recycling, and it divides this
process into a total of 6 steps
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the recycling of waste
paper
includes steps
that involve human labour, heavy machinery and chemicals.
The process begins when waste
paper
is collected from public paper
banks and from businesses. and then
the waste
paper
is sorted by hand. in this
stage, the paper
is graded and the unsuitable paper
is removed. After the process of sorting has been completed, it is delivered to a paper
mill.
The Next step is
cleaning. upon reaching this
stage, cleaning, pulping and removal of other materials such
as staples are involved. After
this
, inks and contaminants such
as glue are removed from the paper
. Lastly
, in the stage of paper
making machine, machine manufacture of usable paper
. finally
, we can get a recycling paper
after six steps
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