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Now- a – days for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in further and what is your opinion?

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In our modern days,it is considered that for many people the network is replacing regular
books
.In
this
 ,essay I will discuss how the
internet
 will eventually replace
books
 and will give some reasons why
i
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I
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 think that it is a positive trend.
To begin
 with,there will not be any
books
 in the future,the reason for
that is
 swift-spreading technologies.
For instance
,I have not mentioned how smartwatches appeared,in one moment
this
 technology got world-famous.
Furthermore
,with nowadays trends of the
internet
 exceeding,
books
 will disappear in a short-term period of time,
also
 today fewer and fewer people read
books
 in the page format.
To conclude
,
books
 will be eradicated and replaced by the
Internet
 in a tiny amount of time. I am of the opinion that it is a positive process,
due to
 the fact that it is much more convenient to use the
Internet
instead
 of
books
.
For example
,
personally
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,personally
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 I would rather prefer to read something online at home than
going
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go
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 to the library.
Moreover
,some of the passages might not be in the library,
whereas
in
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on
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 the web you get access to all
books
 that you can find on Earth.
In addition
, on the
Internet
 most of the time access to
books
 is free,
otherwise
 there only will be low-cost subscriptions.
To sum up
,it is by far easier to read
books
 on the web.
To conclude
,with modern days ,trends we will witness the milestone of the
internet
 in the sphere of
books
 very soon.In my point of ,view it will make a profound effect on the Earth and we should not be afraid of it.
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