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Now- a – days for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in further and what is your opinion?

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In our modern days,it is considered that for many people the network is replacing regular
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 will eventually replace
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 think that it is a positive trend.
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 in the future,the reason for
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 swift-spreading technologies.
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,I have not mentioned how smartwatches appeared,in one moment
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 technology got world-famous.
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,with nowadays trends of the
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 exceeding,
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 will disappear in a short-term period of time,
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 today fewer and fewer people read
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 in the page format.
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,
books
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 will be eradicated and replaced by the
Internet
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 in a tiny amount of time. I am of the opinion that it is a positive process,
due to
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 the fact that it is much more convenient to use the
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instead
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 of
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 I would rather prefer to read something online at home than
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 to the library.
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,some of the passages might not be in the library,
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 the web you get access to all
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 that you can find on Earth.
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, on the
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 most of the time access to
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 is free,
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 there only will be low-cost subscriptions.
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,it is by far easier to read
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 on the web.
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,with modern days ,trends we will witness the milestone of the
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 in the sphere of
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 very soon.In my point of ,view it will make a profound effect on the Earth and we should not be afraid of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • democratizing education
  • digital formats
  • environmental impact
  • publishing industry
  • tactile experience
  • attention spans
  • augmented reality (AR)
  • virtual reality (VR)
  • innovations
  • vast array
  • resources
  • physical books
  • digital books
  • convenience
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