Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Many food and beverage

products

that are produced contain high levels of

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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, which causes many

health

problems. These

products

should be made more expensive to urge people not to buy sugary

products

.

Sugar

is a very common

health

issue nowadays, and

this

can

leads

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lead

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to other

health

diseases

for example

heart failure, high cholesterol levels, and obesity. Increasing

prices

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the prices

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of meals and drinks that contain

sugar

can play a vital role to encourage people to take less sugary

products

.Public awareness about the diseases that

sugar

causes

also

plays a keen part in less consumption of sugary

products

. Sugary

products

are more expensive than common food items or drinks.If the government applies more tax on these items, it can lead to highly decreased consumption or usage. In most Asian countries, people take much more high levels of

sugar

and are generally attracted to

products

that contain more

sugar

, because they are better in taste, but the pleasure is temporary and it can lead to serious

health

issues like heart disease, and obesity. In a survey, over the past few

years

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there is a noticeable increase in the usage of

sugar

. In hospitals,the number of patients suffering from diabetes has

also

increased. In conclusion, increasing prices and public awareness about

sugar

will play a significant part in lowering carbohydrate intake.