Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays artificial intelligence is becoming a vital part of our daily life. We can face many aspects of our routine which are replaced by

robots

and our occupations are not excluded too.

However

, I believe that all jobs can not be done by

artificial

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intelligent

robots

as human uptake in some spheres is truly important. There are many professions

such

laboring

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workers in

the

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manufacture

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or waiters in

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restaurants which were replaced by

robots

and working perfectly without human being interaction. Even it is obviously seen that

artificial

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intelligent

robots

will not do any mathematical or analytical mistakes addressing the situation in the business. There are many examples which could be provided

such

as in Japan some companies like Samsung that replaced their accountants with

robots

and we are witnessing how they are working ideally rather than people who can make some mistakes because of the less work concentration or health issues.

On the other hand

, all professions are not required only mathematical or research skills.

Therefore

, I reckon, some jobs must not be committed by

robots

such

as teachers, doctors,

psychologists

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and psychologists

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as their

qualification

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qualifications

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strictly need empathic feelings in the work process which could not be reflected by automatic machines.

For instance

, children are able to achieve and love some subjects because of their personal inner feelings towards

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the teacher

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teacher

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or patients may be in a good mood even if they are sick when a cheerful doctor is smiling and

make

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them feel better. In conclusion, I would like to say that some occupations ought to be replaced by

robots

as they can work without any interruptions or

disturbs

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disturbances

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Moreover

, some jobs must be done only with human uptake.

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Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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In many countries paying for things, using mobile phone (cellphone apps) is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages.