increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is argued that the best method to tackle the record high level of
pollution
and the increasing
traffic
congestion is by increasing the cost of
petrol
,
however
, I completely disagree with
this
idea. I believe that there are
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of ways to solve these issues without imposing a financial burden on people. There are two main reasons why I am strongly against raising
petrol
prices.
Firstly
, any increase in the cost of
petrol
will be followed by an increase in the prices of almost all products and services.
Therefore
, people who are already struggling financially will suffer the most. In a recent survey, it was found that almost half of the households with a monthly income of two thousand pounds have
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great difficulty when paying their bills.
Secondly
, increasing the price of
petrol
alone will not help
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with reducing
pollution
or
traffic
congestion if no other measures or solutions are taken, as
this
has been tried before in Ghana and has failed to produce any significant difference in the existing problems. In my opinion, there are two approaches to solving the problems of
traffic
congestion and
pollution
. Governments should build factories for electrical
cars
and should make buying a new one tax-free. By doing so, they will encourage buying
such
cars
which are environment-friendly. In Germany, recent governmental measures helped more than a million buyers buy new electrical
cars
and ,
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this
has resulted in a 30% reduction in the level of
pollution
.
Moreover
, encouraging individuals to use public transport
instead
of their
cars
would
also
help solve these issues. Governments can do that by giving students and
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discounts when using buses and building new bus and metro stations. In conclusion,
while
I strongly disagree with the idea of increasing the
petrol
prices, I believe that there are other positive approaches which if taken could solve the expanding
traffic
and
pollution
issues.
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  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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