The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph shows the
number
of shop closers and openings in a given country.
The chart records data from 2011 to 2018; both categories experience a dramatic decrease in different years.
In 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of new open Use synonyms
shops
recorded the highest Use synonyms
score
of 8,500, which is 2,000 higher than the Use synonyms
number
of closer Use synonyms
shops
in the same Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
opening dropped sharply in the following Use synonyms
year
, almost half the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
year
's Use synonyms
number
. After that, through 2014, the Use synonyms
number
of opening Use synonyms
shops
increased steadily to 6,100 and downward. In the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
year
of analysis, the Use synonyms
score
ended with 3,000, the lowest Use synonyms
score
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, in terms of the Linking Words
number
of closings, started at 6,500 and remained stable until 2014, but in 2015, the Use synonyms
score
bottomed out with the lowest Use synonyms
score
in the research period, 500. After that experience, the figure turned to plateau till the final Use synonyms
year
of research; Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
, the Use synonyms
score
is 5,100, which is higher than the Use synonyms
number
of openings in the same period.Use synonyms
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