The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph shows the
number
of shop closers and openings in a given country.
The chart records data from 2011 to 2018; both categories experience a dramatic decrease in different years.
In 2011, the number
of new open shops
recorded the highest score
of 8,500, which is 2,000 higher than the number
of closer shops
in the same year
. However
, the number
of shops
opening dropped sharply in the following year
, almost half the last
year
's number
. After that, through 2014, the number
of opening shops
increased steadily to 6,100 and downward. In the last
year
of analysis, the score
ended with 3,000, the lowest score
. On the other hand
, in terms of the number
of closings, started at 6,500 and remained stable until 2014, but in 2015, the score
bottomed out with the lowest score
in the research period, 500. After that experience, the figure turned to plateau till the final year
of research; at the end
of the year
, the score
is 5,100, which is higher than the number
of openings in the same period.Submitted by hic.lapin.1116 on
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