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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damages does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damages #government #individuals
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In today's era,
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usage
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 of
plastic
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 has been mushrooming at an alarming rate.
Plastic
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 is everywhere,
although
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 it has
bad
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a bad
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 effect on
environment
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the environment
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. In
this
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 essay, we shall discuss some of the drawbacks of
plastic
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usage
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 and suggest some solutions
fo
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 the same in the following
poaragraphs
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paragraphs
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To begin
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 with,
plastic
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 bags, bottles and packaging
is
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 being used for mostly everything.
Plastic
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 is
non- recyclable
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non-recyclable
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, so there is no or less
usage
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 of
plastic
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 later on. In some
countries
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 people burn them, which in
return
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 emit toxic fumes into the environment and
this
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 causes air pollution.
Plastic
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 can cause water pollution too because some of the holy rivers in India were polluted because of dumping garbage into it and that includes a lot of
plastic
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 waste.
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, all the negative
impact
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impacts
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 that
plastic
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 pollution causes will have
bad
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a bad
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 impact on human health, like difficulty in breathing.
Also
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,
animal
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animals
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 and birds can get affected. The government should ban
plastic
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 bags and encourage the
usage
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 of recyclable
paperor
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paper or
 cloth bags.
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 to that, the subordinate bodies should implement fine charges
to
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 those who get caught breaking the law.
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, they
shoul
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should
 check with large superstores or grocery stores.
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, it is
public's
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the public's
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 duty to follow the instruction and help save the
envirnoment
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environment
. To recapitulate,
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 should
implose
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impose
 strict rules regarding
the
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apply
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plastic
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, that everyone should have to follow. Initiative and participation from
public
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the public
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 can save the environment.
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