The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed.

The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed.
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The table illustrates the data on the police budget
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which the
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came
from
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and the two pie charts describe the distribution of the amount of
money
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in the two
of
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year
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2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain,
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, there was an upward trend in all three different sources
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the
money
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spent on salaries was always the majority of contribution. Looking into more details, the highest amount of
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on the police budget belonged to National Government, 1755
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pounds
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in 2017 and it kept rising to 1778
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pounds
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was followed by Local Taxes, at 912
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pounds
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in 2017, after one year, it increase significantly to 102.3
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pounds
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term
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of
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how the
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was spent, the majority of
police
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budget goes to salaries which
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for officers and staff, dropping slightly from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018, Meanwhile, the proportion of Buildings and transport remained
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, at 17% each year. An opposite pattern can be seen in the category of technology, its figure rose sharply from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018, which was always the lowest rate during the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, million, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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