The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010.

The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010.
The table illustrates the different values of merchandise (categorised into equipment, telecommunity, clothing, manufacturing and metals) exported in two years 2009 and 2010. Units are measured in
billion
HK
and per cent.
Overall
, most of the goods for export witnessed an increase in
value
during one
year
period, except for clothing and manufacturing.
Along with
this
, there was a change in the highest product’s
value
from equipment to telecommunity.
Besides
, metals experienced the most striking change.
To begin
with, the price for
overall
export rose from 32
billion
HK
in 2009 to 38.4
billion
HK
in the next
year
., which accounted for a 20% change. Following the same increasing trend, the profit gained from the least
value
exporting product was huge with 122% (increasing from 23
billion
HK
to 5.1
billion
HK
) only in one
year
gap. Regarding the most valuable products, the cost of selling equipment abroad was the highest (with 10.3 million
HK
) compared to other goods in 2009. Standing in second place was telecommunity with 7.9
billion
HK
.
However
, the opposite trend was applied for these two products as the latter was leading with 12.7
billion
and the former was after with 11.6
billion
. The changes took up 61% and 13% respectively. In terms of the other goods, the export
value
decreased slightly by around 1
billion
compared to the first
year
(6
billion
HK
for purchasing clothing and 5.5
billion
HK
for manufacturing). The drop related to clothing products took up 17 %
while
the data for manufacturing was 27%.
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