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The provided bar chart represents the
number
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 of sandwich spread
peanut
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butter
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 and jelly purchased at a supermarket from 2012 to 2016 and the data is not calibrated in percentage form.
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 of
peanut
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butter
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 and jelly
shows
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the
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 upward Trend in 4 years ,on regular bases.
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comma
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 the
number
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 of
peanut
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butter
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jars
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 continuously increased from 2012 to 2014 and reach the highest
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. But in 2015 visa a great fall in it, the
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 of
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 decreased from 70 to 50.
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, in 2016 a sudden growth is noted in
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butter
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jars
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 from 50 to 90.
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case
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 of
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number
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a number
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 of jelly
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jars
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 there is
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 a regular increment
is
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shown from 2012 to 2014.
While
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 in 2015 it file down with minor numbers. But in 2016 it shows
a
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 instant upward trend and reach the greatest point
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that
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 is from 70 to 110.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graph, chart, axis, period, timeframe
  • Trend, increase, decrease, growth, decline
  • Stability, plateau, fluctuate, variability, inconsistency
  • Peak, trough, milestone, threshold, benchmark
  • Significant, considerable, marginal, slight, dramatic
  • Explanation, influence, factor, contribution, correlation
  • Projection, forecast, anticipate, predict
  • Surpass, exceed, fall below, remain constant, maintain
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