Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a “fat tax” is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
As nowadays people are eating more and more fast
food
which creates an unhealthy body
which can harm both individuals as well as
society. Increasing tax
on fast food
will create some effect but has two sides good and bad. My viewpoint and opinion are discussed below.
Firstly
, if a government will take more tax
from fast food
then
it have
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has
teo
impacts. The country should provide information about keeping a Correct your spelling
two
body
fit and fine. The country should give knowledge to a school about good
Add an article
the good
body
. For example
, by
giving Change preposition
apply
knowlehge
about proper diet will help Correct your spelling
knowledge
to
countries.
Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, the benefits side of this
is a
public will eat less junk fruits. My young group will eat Correct article usage
the
then
it has great
impact on a nation Add an article
a great
also
. The young children's body
will be good Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
then
it is better for a
nation. Correct article usage
the
Thirdly
, the disadvantage side is that a rich groups
can Correct the article-noun agreement
a rich group
rich groups
afort
but poor groups will fill hard to buy. If Correct your spelling
effort
afford
a fort
state
will ask for high Add an article
the state
tax
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taxes
then
poor
a society will face difficulty. Correct article usage
the poor
For example
, country
like a Add an article
a country
germany
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Germany
have
good health which Change the verb form
has
help
both population and Change the verb form
helps
community
Correct article usage
the community
also
.
In conclusion, if a government wont to reduce unhealthy food
then
should spread awareness among people such
as ' stay away from unhealthy food
and your health will be good. There will be some impacts if a government ask for high tax
but it has also
disadvantage too. Hence
, sparking awareness is more important than imposing Fat
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a Fat
tax
, thus
my viewpoint and my opinion are discuss
in the above data.Change the verb form
are discussed
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