The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The graph illustrates the number of overseas visitors to the coast, mountains, and lakes from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that all the areas in years increase in a specific moment while
the coast is the zone with the most constant rise.
in 1987, the total of overseas foreigners to the seaboard and lakes was nearly 40000 and 10000 respectively. lakes rate increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding the coastline's rate in 2007 and reaching almost 79000 guests at the end
of the period. In the meantime the figure for foreigners in the mountains grew to 30000 in 1987 and stayed the same until 2007 came, the figure rose to 35000.
in early 1987 the sum of foreigners to the coast (40000) was the highest among these three areas. However
, it dramatically declined to 31000 in 1992. Then
there was a growth of 50000 in 1997, and at the end
of the period, the coastline still had the highest figure.Submitted by shahdkandil07 on
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