The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents the data on how the
number
of households changed during the period from 2007 to 2015 in the United States. From the overview, amounts of earnings ranged from less than $25,000 to $49,999
fluctuated
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and fluctuated
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in the past eight years. Annual income which was between $75,000 and $99,999 remained the smallest
group
, and households of those who earned more than $100,000 increased the most. There were roughly 25
millions
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million
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households
of
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in
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the
group
with income less than $25,000 in 2007, and the
number
went up to almost 30
millioins
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million
for the next four years
,
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but decreased a little bit in 2015. The household
number
of
group
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groups
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earning between $25,000 and $49,999 peaked in 2011
,
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and
also
suffered from a slight decrease in 2015, which was similar to the
group
who earned less than $25,000 annually. We can see a fluctuation in the
group
in which people earned between $75,000 and $99,999,
started
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starting
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from about 20
millions
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million
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in 2007, and ended at almost the same
number
in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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