The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the procedure used to make instant
noodles
.
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it is clear that
there are eight stages, beginning with storage silos and ending with labelling and sealing. The process has six main phases, namely mixing raw materials, producing Linking Words
dough
strips, making Use synonyms
noodles
discs, cooking, drying, and packaging.
The first stage of the process is flour kept in storage silos and transported to the manufacturing centre by truck. Use synonyms
At
the next stage, it is combined with water and oil in a big mixer to create Change preposition
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dough
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the Linking Words
dough
passes through several rollers and produces Use synonyms
dough
strips, after Use synonyms
that
the Add a comma
,that
dough
is shaped into Use synonyms
noodles
discs, which is followed by cooking with oil, cooling and drying them. In the following stage, Use synonyms
this
is followed by adding vegetables and spices into cups. Linking Words
Finally
, all cups full of prepared Linking Words
noodles
are labelled and Use synonyms
also
sealing through the use of a labelling machine.Linking Words
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