In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often argued that, in the
future
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the printed
version
of
newspapers
or
books
will not
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anymore because they will be able to read all materials online and
free
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. Much as I agree that digital and free
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of
books
and
newspapers
will
extended
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in
future
, I believe printed
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will still
in
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the cycle of usage. On the one hand, online
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of
books
or
newspapers
will be available for free
due to
improvement
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of technological tools and apps in the
future
.
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and
published
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some applications related to
books
and
newspapers
will help
people
to search and find any
books
that they want.
Moreover
,
improvement
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the improvement
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of technological equipment will provide
people
with some tools to help them read online,
for instance
, digital paper or online book reader will help
people
to find free
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of every
books
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that they want and download and enjoy reading it without paying.
Thus
, digital
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of
books
or other stuff that can
available
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free
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will become popular in society.
On the other hand
, printed
newspapers
or especially
books
will still
usable
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because they are
main
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shape
these
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things and
valuable
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are valuable
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for some
people
.
Printed
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version
of everything including
newspapers
or
books
is the primary and main shape of that so, many
people
specially
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old
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the old
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generation prefer to use printed
version
.
In addition
to
this
, in some
people
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mind,
books
are very valuable things and they prefer to feel
books
and
paged
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in their hands
while
they are reading,
also
according to
the reason that they value
books
, they would rather
to
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collect all the
books
that they read as a collection.
That is
why I think printed
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of
books
or
newspapers
will be used in
future
. In conclusion,
although
digital
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of
books
and
newspapers
may be the major part of the
people
reading during the day,
but
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according to
the reasons that I mentioned, I believe that printed
version
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will still
usable
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be usable
show examples
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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