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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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useful
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 anymore because they will be able to read all materials online and
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. Much as I agree that digital and free
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books
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, I believe printed
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in
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 the cycle of usage. On the one hand, online
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books
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 will be available for free
due to
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improvement
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 of technological tools and apps in the
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published
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 some applications related to
books
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 and
newspapers
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people
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 to search and find any
books
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 that they want.
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,
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 of technological equipment will provide
people
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 with some tools to help them read online,
for instance
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, digital paper or online book reader will help
people
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 to find free
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 of every
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 that they want and download and enjoy reading it without paying.
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, digital
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free
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 will become popular in society.
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, printed
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 or especially
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usable
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 because they are
main
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 shape
these
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 things and
valuable
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are valuable
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 for some
people
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Printed
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 of everything including
newspapers
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 is the primary and main shape of that so, many
people
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specially
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old
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 generation prefer to use printed
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this
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, in some
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people
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 mind,
books
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 are very valuable things and they prefer to feel
books
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paged
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 in their hands
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 they are reading,
also
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 the reason that they value
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, they would rather
to
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collect all the
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 that they read as a collection.
That is
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 why I think printed
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 of
books
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newspapers
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. In conclusion,
although
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 of
books
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newspapers
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 may be the major part of the
people
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 reading during the day,
but
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according to
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 the reasons that I mentioned, I believe that printed
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usable
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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