The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The given line graph depicts information about the frequency of
requests
in person, by
telephone
and by
letter
/ email in a particular tourist office in the United Kingdom during the span of
6-month
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period from January to June.
Overall
, the most notable detail is in-person and
telephone
requests
shared
a
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same upward trend,
while
the opposite allocation can be seen in information for
requests
by
letter
or email category. In more
details
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, in January, in-person
requests
was
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the least favourite of all 3
catigories
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categories
to
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the customers which
was
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stood at only 400. In comparison, written
requests
and
telephone
calls started at 780 and 820, respectively. Despite standing at only under 600 in January, the number of
requests
in person rose steadily over the given period, overtaking
telephone
and
letter
/emails. With regards to
telephone
information request numbers, it saw a slight decrease in the
quantity
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of
requests
, which was followed by
a
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steady growth,
then
reached its highest point at merely 1900.
Also
,
letter
and email
requests
fell marginally until March at 700, before s steep drop, and a levelling off at approximately 400 from May to June.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words requests, telephone, letter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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